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Carol Ann Power's avatar

Your writing is so poignant, sir. It stirs something deep inside of me.

Sad and happy at the same moment.

Please carry on writing for us all across this rather unsettled world so we can listen to each other’s voices and learn.

Refresh one’s thoughts, so to speak.

Kindest regards

Carol Power

Johannesburg

South Africa

Ally Campanozzi's avatar

I really enjoyed reading this. It's very thought-provoking on the subject of maturing, growth, and shifting perceptions. Also, the dialogue/storytelling style worked really well. The pace flowed nicely and it was effective at showing the overall important message of love and understanding.

I thought this line was especially powerful: "“Maturing is about learning how to see everyone with the vision of your mind. Only with such vision can you see the light of love talking to you in everyone and those who do not see it in themselves."

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